Business dissertations often read well and still fall short on one thing examiners care about: whether the recommendations actually follow from the evidence. Esmond reads your draft through a business and management lens and shows where theory, data and advice come apart.
See how Esmond worksMany business students build a solid chapter on a framework such as Porter, the resource-based view or a service quality model, and then never use it again. The analysis runs on common sense rather than on the lens the literature chapter promised. An examiner notices that gap straight away.
A second pattern is the company case that turns into a consultancy report. Recommendations about pricing, staffing or a marketing channel appear in the final chapter without a clear line back to what the interviews or survey showed. Readers then cannot tell whether the advice comes from your research or from your own view of the firm.
Many business dissertations are desk-based, built on published data and existing studies. That is a legitimate design, but it puts more weight on how you select and compare sources. Esmond checks whether your selection is explained and whether conflicting figures are discussed rather than quietly dropped.
If you collected your own data, Esmond reads how you justify the sample and whether the claims in your discussion stay within what a small, convenience-based sample can show.
You upload your draft as a PDF. Short documents come back within minutes; a full dissertation takes longer. You get two things back: your own document with comments in the margin, and a separate feedback report that sets out what to tackle first. Every upload starts with a free preview, and the price follows the length of your document and is shown before you pay. No subscription, no account.
Esmond evaluates your work and writes nothing for you. Each comment points to a passage, explains what a supervisor or examiner might question, and gives a direction for revising it. You decide what to change, and every sentence stays yours.
Esmond is preparing its launch in Ireland and is not taking orders here yet. This page explains what the review does, so you know what to expect when it opens.
Yes. Esmond reads the report as an academic piece of work: whether the analysis rests on evidence and whether the advice follows from it. It does not judge the business decision itself.
It reads how you present and interpret ratios, growth figures or valuations, for example drawing strong conclusions from one year of data. It does not recalculate your spreadsheets.
Esmond is preparing its launch in Ireland and is not taking orders here yet. Until then you cannot upload or order anything here; the guides on this site are free to read.
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